"baatein subha jo khas thi, shaam hota hota aam ho gayi" bahut hi sahi lines hai..keep it up!
waisa dusri line mein meine kuch apni kalpna laaga di hai..par teri line jayeda badiya hai!!
एक टिप्पणी भेजें
2 टिप्पणियां:
"baatein subha jo khas thi, shaam hota hota aam ho gayi" bahut hi sahi lines hai..keep it up!
waisa dusri line mein meine kuch apni kalpna laaga di hai..par teri line jayeda badiya hai!!
एक टिप्पणी भेजें